четверг, 26 марта 2015 г.

My screenplay. Alice in Wonderland

Int. Dark forest. Night.
Alice in her blue dress walks watchfulness. She hears unclear and mystery sounds. Cheshire cat appears suddenly, only his head is visible.
             Alice
Oh, finally I  have met someone! Where I am? Can you explain  me? I know that I  have got in a very strange place.
Alice looks  in Cheshire’s big green eyes. She is a little nervous.
             Cheshire
What do you mean by that?
Cheshire smiles, his body appears.
            Alice
I want to know where I am!
Alice raises her voice. It sounds persistently.
          Cheshire
Is it so important?
Cheshire smiles wider.
           Alice
Of course! How can I feel safe when I don’t know where I am!
She shook her blonde curls.
         Cheshire
More important than place is you… Who are you?
Cheshire flips in the air.
         Alice
What do you mean?  I can't explain myself, I'm afraid, because I'm not myself, you see.
Alice becomes confused.
       Cheshire
Keep your temper
Cheshire begins slowly disappear.
       Alice
Wait! Is that all?
Cheshire disappears. Alice hears his voice and looks up. He is on the tree.
    Cheshire

One more… It is Wonderland, silly. And… we are all mad here.

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A query letter for the film

Dear mister L.
I have recently completed my screenplay. I talk about Alice in Wonderland. The new screenplay is much better, because I completed professional courses of screenwriting,  and I  traveled a lot. So… I have  much inspiration and many ideas about landscapes and general views of locations.
I would like to ask if you would consider reading my latest work. It is an interesting story of a nineteen-year-old Alice. The girl from the tale became mature and she faces many obstacles of an adult life. There are many great scenes, moreover I  included the battle scene and the spectacular ending. I also accurately worked with all the characters.
If you are interested in reading my screenplay, please contact me at the address at the top of the page.
Yours sincerely,
Aliona Ch




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